Need some landing page feedback…

Need some landing page feedback :
I've seen people get some pretty awesome and quality feedback of their landing pages here.
I'd like some feedback on everything : writing, global design, value proposition ..
The landing is here -> https://kaktana.com
Thanks in advance !
Alex

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It's pretty good, just needs a little more attention to detail.

I added some more detailed feedback here: https://828rdcgqkzls5eu.unfaintapp.com/

monsiv

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  Hello !
  Wow, very nice quality feedback about those details
  I've answered in depth in your the comments in your link (unfaint is really good! you just made me discover it)
  I'll make changes to the landing accordingly
  
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Heyo Alex - landing page looks good! I'm not a trader by any means, here's a few points.
1. the main image on right floats to the right on wider screens. view here: https://cl.ly/cba4e7a4e0d1
2. main CTA - will you skyrocket returns with this? Is that the desired outcome or is it save time, money, by automating trades.
3. Backtesting - this looks like a new feature, but not presented with a value prop. its obvious, but why use it & what's the benefit?
I almost feel the 'trade while you sleep' 2nd CTA and the first CTA need to be combined. 'Trade While You Sleep' sub-cta = 'automoate your strategies without a line of code'.

Hope this helps.
Tim
pittman021

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  Hey Tim,
  
  Thanks for the report on the main image on the right, I'll fix it
  
  Good question, I'll say it's both but mainly it's to skyrocket returns.
  
  Mh, the value prop is on the gray text on the bottom of the pic, you haven't seen it, I guess it should be placed more in value
  
  I agree with that, I've just swapped the "Automate your strategies" 2nd CTA with the first "Trade while you sleep" so that people see directly what it's about. I've also added the "without a line of code" part on the first sub-cta "Define your strategies and trade automatically based on your conditions, without a line of code"
  
  It definitely helped, thanks !
  I've just put the results of the 4th point online
  Alex
  Alex
  
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    Awesome, glad I could help. Definitely not a crypto trader so I might be missing context. Good luck!
    
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  wow - justinvincent gave the same exact advice. take 2nd CTA and move it up to the 1st. Agreed you should clarify its crypto.
  
  hidden in the middle of the page is mention of 'telegram account'. what is that & how does it relate to this offering?
  
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    Telegram is a social network used a lot by crypto enthusiasts, they all know what it is, and the image with it shows what the bot does (giving notifications)
    
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There's no way to know that it's about crypto unless you scroll. I thought it was a 3D printer product at first look.

Delete the entire top blue block and start the page with the "Trade while you sleep" block.

Then it would be pretty good with a side effect of a nicer design ;)

I mocked it up for ya!

https://www.dropbox.com/s/13qlqmvzxhzjxqi/Screenshot 2019-01-26 11.49.05.png?dl=0

justinvincent

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  The top blue block helps with setting the dark blue theme of the website, but I'm keeping the idea of moving the second CTA "Trade while you sleep" directly on top.
  Thanks !
  
  Alex
  
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