#landing-page-feedback
#landing-page-feedback
I would love your feedback on the following things Julian!
- The Title and Subtitle in the hero section. I feel like they don't clearly explain what the app does.
- The copy on the Tasty features section I feel they could be better.
- General feedback on what you think about the landing page.
Thank you!
nice.
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^^ not specific enough. if you had to describe this to your grandma in 2 sentences, what would you say? use that. e.g. "A tool for pitching your ideas — presentations, products, interests, anything..." or something
i'd swap the order of of the 2nd and 3rd sections — get right to the examples so ppl know what this is about instead of get bored from reading text descriptions
make clicking on each example load the real thing. that'd be dope. that's what'd get me to convert.
hope you kick ass, tekeste!
Oh wow! I don't know how I missed your feedback. I don't think IH sent me a notification. Thank you for replying.
I have incorporated some of your feedback.
https://cleanmock.com
Thank you again.
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Thanks for the feedback I have made changes to the tagline and header and I think you will find them better. Give it a look and let me know what you think.
https://cleanmock.com
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