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What is your first impression and how do you feel when you land on our website?

What is your first impression and how do you feel when you land on our website? https://plutio.com

#landing-page-feedback

on March 16, 2019
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    Website looks good, but I would change the copy.

    If a visitor doesn't understand what your product is about within 3 seconds he will bounce away.

    "The fundamentally better way to run your business" means nothing.

    Header=highlight the benefit

    Subheader=what it is, how it's done, who is it for

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    Generally speaking it looks very solid and well done, definitely builds trust when landing on the page.

    But IMO there's too much going on.

    • the video changes scenes very fast and I don't like this weird perspectives => I don't get anything out of it, I would probably leave the website instantly after seeing it

    • there's way too much social proof. I mean I get it, it looks like people are using it. You don't have to throw someone at me every second line, as I'm not going to read it anyway after the first one.

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    First impression: neat design.
    I understood what the product does so the messaging was clear.
    However I felt there's something missing which ties these different tools together. Perhaps a presentation more like Zoho.com where they have a name for each app, and maybe it makes sense to use the word "suite" to clarify even further.
    Good luck!

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    I am a UX newbie but here is some feedback from my side. Hope it helps you.

    Just like @alx_gr , I felt that too much is going on . Bottom ticker is moving fast. Video perspective is weird like Windows screensavers. Somehow, the navigation bar looks very dull (may be it is the colour scheme ? Need a whiter white perhaps ?)

    What if the likes of 'Manage your projects and tasks' become the focus on the landing page and then let me navigate to more detail elsewhere in the page ?

    What if the social proof is moved down the page in the same section as "Finally, everything in place"

    One good reference could be (and I have no affiliation at all) : www.notion.so

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    You have had much better taglines over the last few months. Something like "All in one business manager for small businesses" would be more self explaining. Otherwise I like your creativity. Maybe you should try to run "alternative to ... " pages to compete with other business management tools in search engines :)

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    I'll give you my brutally honest train of thought as I open the homepage:

    • First instinct is to try to understand what it is, and how it can help me. The name gives nothing away. Tagline means nothing to me. The secondary piece of text is too wordy, so I move attention to the video thing. Takes about 10 seconds before I start to get it, coz it seems like it does everything. Took too frustratingly long to know what it is and does. I think the tagline should be brutally simple and just tell me like 'Projects and Task Management for Small Businesses'.
    • The video effect is useful, but it's unusually small (even on my Macbook Air), and I find the curved effect annoying. Think it could just be a generic normal sized flat animation.
    • The testimonials are too wordy, so I instantly skip over them.
    • THEN everything below the fold starts to make sense and is nirvana from there.
    • By the end, I still find myself wanting to know 'who is it for'. Freelancers and micro businesses? What type of freelancers or businesses? That's broad. I'm technically a micro business, but I don't get the sense it applies to me. I think you could halve the size of the testimonials, BUT as part of each, tell me the name of each business and what type of business it is, so I can get that understanding at the top.
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