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A landing page for a making friends project. Need feedback. Bumpy.

by Mark Prutskiy
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1xazF6zxMDZ_dZLxMGdQxq-_lVFFHE79d/view?usp=sharing

Hi guys,

We help lonely millennials make friends so they feel better.

Making an informative landing page is a new thing for us.

Looking for feedback.

P.S. Pitch-deck: https://www.indiehackers.com/post/pitch-deck-for-seed-round-were-seeking-700k-need-feedback-c8aa5

Mark Prutskiy's avatarMark Prutskiy
submitted this linkon June 27, 2022
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    Overall I think it looks good!
    A few suggestions:

    • The hero illustration is a bit too conceptual for a potential customer. I would want to see exactly what the app I'll be interacting with is.
    • Barrier section - I think this part has too much text. There's a lot of information to look at in one section. I would suggest removing the extra information and just keeping the most essential.
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