Hey!
While I'm new to programming and start-up/SaaS, I have a good amount of experience in mass marketing, especially with ads and landing page.
On my last eCommerce brand I made a product waitlist page who had 40% conversion rate, so I thought I could give IH a few tips to make a good landing page!
Here is the process I use to make landing page that (usually) convert!
Note: Since I have a fresh landing page from last week, I'm going to shamelessly use my app as an example here 😌
First, before thinking of any functionality to add on your page, take some time to REALLY think about the “real benefits” on your product.
For that, take your product / feature, and ask yourself “So what?” 5 times for each. What does it means for your customer? 🤔
- Product: A customer service A.I. that answers repetitive questions.
- So what? It automate your customer service
- So what? Founders spend less time doing customer service
- So what? Founder have more time
- So what? They can focus on growing their company
- So what? They get more success / Freedom
Do that for your main features, and if you know your customer, you should have a good idea of which final "so what" will resonate the most. That's going to be your marketing angle.
Note: It's totally ok to make different landing pages for different targets.
Now, it’s time to write. Not on VS Code, but on Google Docs.
Create 4 sections: Attention, Interest, Desire and Action.
Here is what you’re going to write in each:
Something short and catchy, that will directly make them feel concerned. You want them to think “Wow, that’s me! 🤯”. A question usually works well here.

You’ve got their attention, congrats!
Now you have to keep them reading. The goal here is to show them that the product can help them. You can talk about:

Now, it’s time to make them feel stuff and desire your product.
That’s where the ✨magic✨ happens. Take what you wrote in the first section, and put it here. You want your customer feel a tickling in their belly when they read that. You want them to “feel” the benefits and think “Oh damn, I would love that”.

This is where you’re going to ask people to join your waitlist or purchase.
That’s probably where people will run into objections, so you can also add counter-objections, social proof, scarcity, bonuses etc.
Basically anything that can justify why should they act now and now and not in 3 months?

Here is the Google Docs draft I used if you want to see everything in one place.
Nice, you’re now done with the writing! At least, for now. Read it, ask other people to read it to get feedback (not your mom thought, ask someone relevant), and improve it.
👉 A copy is not a one-shot thing, it’s something you improve over time.
In my opinion, that’s ONLY when you have your copy ready that you can start planning the design.
Obviously, design depends on what you’re selling, but here is a few guidelines I use to design my pages:
Try to limit yourself to HTML & basic CSS. You don’t need to spend days making an incredible design with fancy sliders and complicated code when you're just starting. You'd be surprised to see the kind of ugly pages that are making a killing just because the content resonated with the audience.
Big chunks of texts sucks.
Add 😁 emojis, 🖼 pictures, and 🎥 videos (if relevant). It makes your page easier to read. Don't turn your page into a circus tho, you don't want to distract your reader either.
Sometimes, people don’t need to read the whole thing to be convinced.
When it's the case you want them to be able to find a button on their screen at anytime. Make sure there is always one visible.
Last but not least, ALWAYS ask for feedback.
Run split-tests if you have enough traffic, or just ask other people to roast your landing page, and improve it based on the feedback you receive.
More than often, what you think is the best is not. Only your customers can decide.
From my experience, the "ugly" version works better than the fancy one more than you can imagine.
So, test everything, and iterate over time.
With all that you should be able to make a nice landing page!
If you want to see an example, here is the final live page I used in the examples.
Hope the tips helps.
Good luck!
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If you are looking for landing page inspirations I would recommend my website landings.dev :)
I actually use it to get some inspirations, my next landing page is made of a mix of things I found there 😂
Great resource @Jeannen !
I'll try to follow up your process and let's see what's gonna happen :)
Nice, let me know how it goes! 😁
Looks pretty thorough. Thanks for this.
Would be using it on my landing page.
You're welcome, glad it helps!!
Really nice, @Jeannen. Very helpful.
Thanks man, appreciate! 👌
testing on my landings! Thx
Cool, happy it's helpful!
Very nice summary and step by step plan! Will immediately try this approach on one of my landingpages.
Glad it helps ! 😁
Feel free to share it if you want feedback!