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πŸš€ A simple landing page - need your feedback

Just launched a very basic landing page here πŸ‘‰ tinydojo.com
Idea is to accepting users' request to join the private beta.

Please let me know your feedback and suggestions!

on July 22, 2020
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    I had a friend who was a soccer coach who also gave lessons who was creating something for part timers to bill. The payments are not as easy as the site has it. You have to allow for plans like someone buys 20 lessons at a time and then keep track of how many lessons have been given.

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      @disrael thanks for the suggestion. Currently is one time payment for fixed duration class and recurring billing for regular classes. The credit based billing and single session units are the two things I am currently working on.

      Can you please connect me to you friend? I am looking to have a 10 min conversation to understand the requirement better.

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        I sent him an email with a link to this conversation.

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          πŸ‘ Thanks David! I am looking forward to speaking with him.
          I can be reached anytime on email - me@raysourav.com

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    The overall concept is clear.

    However, I don't understand what the "auto-scheduling" algorithm means. If it is something that is not fleshed out yet, you can drop it from the landing page. The concept pitch is clear even without it.

    Invest time in building at least two mockups -dashboard and the tinydojo powered website . it will add more credibility to the landing page.

    Lot of copywriting and spelling mistakes.

    IMO "Get early access" OR "get an early invite"

    What's a "subscriber list" in the context of online classes?

    Solely focus VS focus

    Audiences? Plural?

    Get AN instant website.

    Sentence has no impact - "Let go of challenging ways of user-onboarding and make it easy for your audience to follow the schedule."

    Unit has no impact - "Clutter-Free Experience"

    Spelling - "PayPal.Me payment links for all Internation Payments"

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      πŸ‘‹ Saurabh
      Thanks for a honest feedback. I will fix the copy and spelling mistakes right away.
      I understand the "Auto Scheduling" is confusing. I should use better headers for the features and screenshots.