About to launch my SaaS would love some feedback on the landing page
Hello! in 24hr am about to launch InstaBreed
https://www.instabreed.com a SaaS platform that offers farmers and individuals who are into rabbit breeding or breeding in general, to keep track and control their operation.
Is my approach is clear?
What am I doing wrong?
What could I do better it?
Are my headlines catchy! clears! , do you have something in mind better than what I wrote?
Thanks so much!
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Hey Mohamed. Here is some video feedback on your page. Any questions please let me know:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1GfmD_0nnNYq_yC8YQM5qMRktj1cL8Z0B/view
bro!! , thank you for taking the time to do so! , I will take everything you mentioned in concentration about stuff that I would change in the next update,
if you have any time and would like to look over the whole app, you can sign up and try everything inside and let me know if you would change or would like to things done in a different way.
Quite impressed with this landing page. One immediate observation is I got too much of a DigitalOcean vibe from your blue and the little cube polygons. Maybe tone that down just a tad. I liked how simple your pricing page was. I also think your community system could be very useful for breeders to share info, clever move including that.
Overall, the value proposition is clear. I would strongly advise using original icons/elements on your site though before going to market. Other than that, great job.
The layout and design works pretty well. It's clean and modern looking and there is plenty of white space, which is good.
The copy, however, could use some work.
Take the headline. What does the most modern rabbit breeding software mean? And is modern what breeders are concerned about? It would be better to focus instead on the main benefit. How does the software address a pain point for the target audience.
Make sure you put your benefits into specific, concrete terms that are relevant to your audience. Everything on the page is pretty generic. "Save time", "simplicity and ease" and things like that could be used with just about any product. And the copy explaining these things don't add context.
You want to paint a picture in specific terms. Explain not just what the software can do, but what that will mean for the reader and how the software will do that.
I would also repeat the CTA at least one more time.
Best of luck.
Also the landing page is missing "How" part. I mean ok so you are "The Most Modern Rabbit Breeding Software" but how its gonna solve my problem? and to be specific what problem exactly you are solving? try to build tagline around the solution of the problem
Overall it looks clean but I will recommend to add few real-time screenshots of your SaaS.
The UI looks amazing, can you share your techstack?
old school html & css ( sass ) & js :D
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What are the benefits of your platform over just using excel?
that's the thing if you had a look at the landing page and didn't know what benefits are offering throw instabreed that means I faild,
what do you think instabreed offers?
It depends on the pain points of the target market.
Is the biggest pain point of your users is that they need a substitute to pen & paper remarks? Or is it something else? Try thinking about it more.
I think it's really great. It's easily understandable what soft it is and also pretty clear and nice design. From my point of view, the font is way too modern and I think a more classic one would be nice.
why is it wrong that the website is modern?
The website design is really good as I mentioned above but I don't really like font, it's quite wide and rounded (That's my personal opinion).
Hey, Mohamed. I like where you are heading on this landing page. The icons are adorable.
I do have a few suggestions.
Thanks, @chrishamrick, I really appreciate your feedback and yes those 2 are on my todo list already, having issues creating that video tho, do you have any recommendation of a company or freelancer you used their help creating product ( walk throw, promotion ) video?
I don't have any recommendations. I'm at the same point that I need to make an explainer video for my startup. I'm going to try to make it myself first.
Do farmers use SaaS products?
yes, the agriculture tech is one of the rising industries these days
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what areas that the text unreadable at?
and yes the software only for rabbits :D