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Added new illustrations to rebase-book.com

Hey everyone,

less than 4 weeks ago I've launched the pre-sale of the book I'm writing and aiming to publish by the end of January 2020.

After adding a download link for a sample chapter to the landing page, I've now also added some of the illustrations I've created for the book.

What do you think? I'm grateful for any feedback related to the landing page in general.

https://rebase-book.com

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    Hey Pascal,

    Structure is good, wording needs some help.

    There are some omitted words - top tip, read it out loud, it helps you catch some of them.

    My edits are in quotes.

    A short and complete ebook that takes your productivity to the next level and gives you full control of your commit histories by teaching you the concepts of rebasing in Git.

    "Take your productivity to the next level in less than x pages. Learn the power of rebasing in Git and take full control of your commit history."

    OPTIMIZED & EFFECTIVE
    Short and to the point. REBASE focuses on what's effective and teaches how to get the most out of your work without wasting time.

    "REBASE gives you a streamlined approach to be your most effective self using Git."

    BECOME A MASTER
    Undoing or re-arranging changes, splitting commits apart or squashing them together. Learn how to get more done faster.

    "Get work done faster. Learn how to best re-arrange changes, split commits or combine them."

    TIMELESS CONTENT
    What you learn will apply tomorrow and beyond. Git is timeless. Getting it to know well will always pay out in the long run. Make it part of your tool belt.

    "Add Git to your skills for lifelong career benefit. [thousands? millions?] rely on Git daily and the number is only growing."

    WHAT'S INSIDE
    REBASE is packed with tips and tricks on how to become not only super productive, but also highly flexible with your code base.

    "REBASE is packed with tips and tricks to improve your productivity and maintain high flexibility within your code base."

    Hope this helps!

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      @jrivanco This is extremely helpful!

      Thank you so much for taking the time to fine-tune my copy!
      I really appreciate that 🙏

      The wording sounds much much better and I certainly wouldn't have been able to come up with something like that myself.

      Interested in a free copy of the book in return?

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        No worries my friend.

        I appreciate the offer, though I wouldn't know who to share it with.

        There is something you can do for me though if you're looking to pay it forward.

        I have a side project, MorningPrompt.com (coming Jan 1) - It's a business writing prompt a day for people to talk about their industry and build their personal brand.

        I'm just looking to get the word out and drive subscriptions to validate it. If you could see value in getting an email a day with a writing prompt aimed at sharing business knowledge - would you consider sharing it with your network?

        I'm also open to any introductions to other networks :)

        Hope the book launch goes great!

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