Advice / critique for PH launch

Hi folks,

I've never put anything on PH before. Honestly I find it completely daunting - everyone seems to have an army of people ready to start "upvoting" which I neither have, nor will likely ever have...

... so we've decided to give it a try with our little group of makers, colleagues and friends to lend support.

I've tried to write a decent, clear and honest lander but I'm a coder not a writer.

I would love it if any other makers could let me know whether this page is actually clear? Thank you so much! 🤗

Here it is - 😬 - twiDAQ on Product Hunt - live in 6 hours!?

Thank you!