All-in-One Dental Care Landing Page Feedback.

Congrats. The page takes a long time to load for me. This sometimes occurs if you use a free version of heroku or similar hosting service and you don't have lots of traffic yet, since they spin down the servers. It may be worthwhile to upgrade to paid hosting so the page loads more quickly.

I agree with @falcon007 on the 3rd point. Text size, heading, and paragraph text should be a lot bigger, both for desktop and mobile.

Hi there,

I have a very quick suggestion - it misses - People!

Page looks minimal, clean and futuristic, but lacks empathy, emotion and character.

Hope that helps.

Hi @muratgocmen,

Few things to improve:

1. Make the tagline simple: The most advanced electrical toothbrush at an affordable price (In the next section show what you get in the box)
2. The main images at the top are confusing
3. I suggest you increase the text size and reduce the text content (remember: first time users will only be on your site for may be 30 sec max. A lot of information makes it difficult for the mind to process and they tend to turn off). Therefore keep it simple.

I am impressed with what you are building. I have built hardware products in the past, I know how difficult it is. I sincerely wish your product takes off in Kickstarter/Indiegogo.

All the best.