Am I putting too much info on my landing page?
My landing page:
https://kickstart.dev
Struggling a bit with my value proposition.
On the one hand I want to make things as clear and easy to understand as possible, but on the other hand it feels like the product really is made of the parts (ie unlimited email, analytics, mailing lists, landing pages, boilerplate, domain name organization).
Is it clear what the product does?
Should I narrow down?
Here's a video with my thoughts - https://www.loom.com/share/4f1b1f299bf24fd1b1fc8f0999cf301f
Thanks so much Nathan, really nicely done.
Also shows that how I experience something does not have to match with what the rest of the world sees.
I found this artist who's doing pop art style comics and I liked it, you see 90s clipart, haha!
Will mull this over a bit and see how I can apply your advice.
Thanks again!
If that's a style you like and want it to be reflected in your brand, I think there are ways you can make it work, but you've got to really own it. Use that same style throughout the page - fonts, icons, etc. Make it big and fun. Check this page out for an example https://www.supermonitoring.com/
That's good advice, thanks Nathan.
Yea I'd try to simplify this page a bit if you can. When I see the above the fold content, it's not immediately clear what your value prop is and the waiting list field is too far down on the page. (I'd also recommend changing "sideproject" to 2 words). The concept is pretty cool, though!
Yea, I should definitely try to simplify.. Reminds me of that quote: 'I'm sorry I didn't have time to write a shorter letter'
Thanks for your feedback!
Haha such a good quote! 🤣
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Hi Simon, thanks for your insights.
I think you are right. I'm having a hard time figuring out what the most useful part is, so I ended up doing everything.
What would feel most useful to you (ie email, analytics, mailing list, landing page, dns, domain name organization/scoring,...)?
About being able to look around by closing the payment box: it wasn't intentional, but I'm aware it's possible.
There are some server side checks so you won't actually be able to setup email etc.
But agree: could/should be much more polished!
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Food for thought for sure..
I don't really want to create yet another page builder, so would have to look at the angle there.
Or maybe just the fact that it's 100% focused on founders trying to validate their idea/build an audience is the angle..?
Or that it's really, really convenient and fast to setup?
Thanks for your input, really appreciate it!