It started with me asking for help on Linkedin because I was stuck creating a new headline for our startup.
Here is my post >>>>
I think I have hit a wall here so I need your help.
I am not feeling great about any of the headlines but some of them are an improvement compared to what I had on Monday!
Which headline will make you read more?
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Or, someone might suggest something even better :)
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I was stuck and the Linkedin community jumped in to help.
Then, something amazing happened.
Joel Klettke who is a well know copywriter ( I have been following Joel for over a year but never talked to him directly) commented on my post.
He suggested a few better headlines.
But he did more
Joel wrote his own post mentioning my dilemma and asked other copywriters to help.
I got so much feedback and too many good headlines.
I will be running several AB tests to see which headline works better.
Joel is an excellent copywriter and seems like a great guy. I've watched a number of his interviews, and he drops a ton of knowledge.
He is very generous with his knowledge.
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100% true. Sometimes it is easier to say, I need help. There are plenty of people who are willing to lend a helping hand.