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Any design tips for my landing page?

Hey Hackers,

I just started testing demand for an idea I have, agentlyapp.com
It's basically Bumble for real estate agents. The app would allow home buyers and sellers to browse agents and pick the one that fits their needs the best.

It's super simple but would love any tips or advice you have!

Thanks

on January 22, 2021
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    Hey @dwc here is my feedback as well - I made a quick video instead of writing a comment, hope you gonna find it useful :)

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yVjVaIRAh-4

    Here is also the link I referred to in my video https://marketingexamples.com/conversion/landing-page-guide

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      Thank you so much for making this, really appreciate it! Going to watch it now.

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    Not really sure about the intro animation... It starts dark and then gets very white, which is a little unpleasant on my eyes. The rest looks great!

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      Fixed! Thank you for the feedback :)

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    Hey Daniel, couple of thoughts for you:
    I assumed the underlined words were links to more detailed descriptions about what you meant - that's a very familiar design pattern so I would consider bolding them instead to emphasise them so people don't think they're broken links.
    I'd also be more specific about the problem you solve, how you solve it and why that's valuable for your audience. Currently I'm left wondering what it is that is that makes those other platforms bad and how exactly you make the experience '10x' better and indeed why that would even be valuable to me.
    Just a personal note but whenever I hear '10x' mentioned I feel it's very buzz-wordy and the product loses credibility immediately. This might just be my cynical view but I'd far rather be told very clearly why it's valuable instead.
    Julian Shapiro has some great tips for writing this kind of value proposition content in his post on landing pages: https://www.julian.com/guide/growth/landing-pages.
    Also this article: https://marketingexamples.com/copywriting/rewriting-landing-pages (and several others on that same site) might be useful too

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      Wow. THIS IS AMAZING. Sorry for responding late, been busy! I know my landing page needs a lot of work done to it, hoping to get around to it based on the feedback from yourself and others :) Thank you again for the feedback!