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Any feedback on this landing page? It's designed for early-stage founders.

Here's the landing page for my new market research startup. Any suggestions? Is the offer clear?

https://surveysays.app

on January 27, 2021
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    1. Ask any question to 300 people - as an enterprise i would like to know, who are these people?
    2. If you have mentioned the brand, case-studies of how they used it, and how it helped, if not case studies maybe testimonials would be good.
    3. overall looks clean.

    I would love to know your thoughts on karenapp.io

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      Great job! I do think, though, there's about 2X as much text on this page as there needs to be. It's a lot to read. And the black nav bar is a bit heavy. But I think both of these things can be fixed in a matter of hours to make this landing page 5X better than it is now.

      Where did you find your icons under "Benefits for Small Businesses"?

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    Great service. I could use it now, actually.

    The offer is (mostly) clear, but it didn't answer my first question: "Can I specify a target user group?" How narrow with demo/psycho/geographics or industry & role can I get? For me, everything about the value of your service hinges on that.

    The "Data Quality" page needs copy editing - probably by a content marketer. Might as well have them cover the landing page, too. It's not bad, but those two pages are your only pitch.

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      I'll review the Data Quality page.

      Good question about targeting. I should specify that on the homepage somewhere. There are loose targeting options. By country (USA, Canada), gender (male, female), and age (18 to 34, 45 to 54, 55+).

      The more people who use this service, the more specific we can be with our targeting. So hope to add more options soon!

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    This looks very interesting! I would say, instead of: "Get the answers you need to make informed, data-driven decisions." replace it with a follow-up to what you mean by this: "Ask any question to 300 real people."

    The 300 people thing is your hook but you need to spell out what that means. Great hook too!

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      Great suggestion!