Any feedbacks on my new elevator pitch?

Ha! I like it. I thought it was well communicated, told a clear story, and was funny. All good things to have if you want people to remember your pitch.

My only feedback would be the part where there are two phones side by side. I felt like the screen recordings went on a little too long and too fast for me. I understand it was there to show the user flow, but it seemed distracting with the amount of details and step shown. On contrary, I liked when there was one phone on the right hand side and the left hand side detailed the benefits. I think you could use that to switch the view up during that long two phone time range. Just a thought.

Hope that helps! Good luck at the contest.

Oh, your presentation is beautiful. Quite an interesting niche with little competition. I even wonder how you came up with it. It's just genius. Elevators are in demand in any city, even if the city is small. Your project is very good, but it has one flaw. In the production and installation of elevators on an industrial scale, you need services using special equipment. For example,Hin Chong's BCA-approved lift maintenance services . If you don't take care of the little things like this from the start, there's an 80% chance that things will go badly, and you won't be far from bankruptcy. Good luck with that.

The voice-over is great! My concern early on is the images being used. They don't seem to tell the story very well and many of the elements you are trying to point out are small and hard to decipher.