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Any suggestion on how to make better my homepage tagline? โœŒ๏ธ

Hi Guys! I love this community so I need your help ๐Ÿ†˜.

๐Ÿ‘‰This is the homepage of my company: https://www.emojics.com/

We provide tools to collect feedback and leads through emoji ๐Ÿ˜

The current tagline is "Convert more visitors into customers knowing their feelings"

I'd like something more catchy ๐Ÿ”ฅany suggestions?

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    Julian Shapiro has the most comprehensive guide on landing pages and talks about taglines (he's a mentor for various YC companies):

    https://www.julian.com/guide/growth/landing-pages

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      This is a brilliant link! Thank you, I'm going to study and make some mods to my home page before launching.

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      Thank you @adamski!

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    Just a few after looking up some things on why Facebook decided to introduce reactions and kind of coming on a play with words with your own slogan.

    "Collect reactions, understand feelings, convert your visitors into customers today!"

    "Know reactions, understand feelings, convert your visitors into customers today!"

    "Convert visitors into customers with reactions today!"

    "Understand your visitors with emoticons and convert them into customers!"

    "Collect, analyze, and convert visitors to customers today!"

    Just some brainstorming.

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      Thank you so much for your effort!

      I really like the first proposal, the message is pretty clear and complete :)

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    Your tagline has to scream your main value proposition to your target customers. What's the core pain point you're solving and who are you solving it for.

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      You're right! The problem is that, there are a lot of ways to express a concept.

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      Clever but risky! Thank you for the suggestion ๐Ÿ˜

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          I like a lot! Thanks for the wisdom :)