Are you convinced by this landing page?
Hey everyone.
I would love to hear your thoughts about the landing page of the product I'm building, Mon. I have been thinking to add GIFs to the website as I feel the landing page does not tell the whole story.
Here's the landing page: https://mon.rocks
Check it out and tell me:
Do you know what kind of product is this?
Are you convinced to try it out?
Also, if you're interested in money management apps, I'd really love to talk! 🍻
You have alignment issues in the "Lite" button.
As far as the rest of the page, the answer is no. I do not know what type of product this is. You say "manage money," but it appears you're actually "tracking spending." A money manager is moving my money around to increase its growth.
I suggest a thorough copywriting review as a lot of the phrasing is off, and grammar could use improvement as well.
Hey, thanks a lot for this feedback! After talking to people, I received a similar feedback (confusion about the purpose of the service). That is why I'm acting on it ASAP.
Thanks again!