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Are you mean enough to roast my landing page? 😈

I only used Brizy Tally and Emoji and it took me 1 hour 🙄

It's a website https://lasalesmachine.brizy.site/ for SaaS directories submission services, we help founders submit their SaaS on +300 startup and AI directories with + 1 billion Monthly Traffic!

🎁 Bonus: Get a list of free SaaS directories to submit your software and boost your visibility & revenue!

on April 28, 2023
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    • Too much text
    • Accessibilty sucks big time wioth the text on gradient
    • You have two main cta, one of them has to be less imperative over the other one
    • The hover on your button is not accessible
    • Emojis make your site look tacky
    • Som headings have bad formatting, if you align center to left, align center to left, not ones on the left, and other center
    • Need more space between sections and between the grids make the gap bigger
    • You don't need dark mode
    • The pricing page is practically unreadable, align text to left and remove the emojis
    • The link on the bottom linking to the page I am on makes no sense whatsoever

    I can see it took you one hour

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      Wow! what a feedback! Thank you so much Michael!

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    Took 1 hour and it shows. 1 billion monthly traffic is probably false, unless it's fake traffic.

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      lol 1 billion monthly traffic on the +300 directories and not my website :D

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    • If you run it through sizzy you will see the gradient gets chopped at hte top and bottom on tablets.
    • +300 software directories* not directory
    • its not clear what the social media groups in the pricing options means.
    • not a huge fan of the emojis
    • it would be helpful to show a reference example of what info they gave you and it listed on some of the sites.
    • "The Most Affordable Solution to Reach 1 Billion Customers for Your SaaS " is miss leading.
    • blog link doesn't go anywhere, i would just comment it out until you have something to put there.
    • i would suggest breaking the page into segments with different background colours tailwindui has some good examples
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      Oh that's mean 😂 just kidding thank you so much for your feedback!! I wish all the best

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