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Ask IH: Could someone proofread my article for IH before I publish?

Become a People Mover – Indie Hackers

Does it make sense?
Are there any typos that Grammarly and I missed?
Should I expand on anything?
Thank you in advance!

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    Overall, an interesting article. I think you could go more in-depth on each topic like you did for the first point. Also thought the part on “associations” was a bit too brief, and slightly confusing. Had to read that a few times to grok what Jobs actually did. Lastly, you’re missing a link to your site at the end to go along with your call to action.

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      Thanks Zeke! I'll try to clear up the "associations" section.