Attractive Tag Line for New App. What's your opinion?

Interesting.

"Plan events with ease, so you can enjoy them in peace."
"We killed the "Event Manager" job title - sorry."

Hey @AmyWilliamson,

Currently, it's hard to assess what this product does from the landing page, which makes coming up with a tagline difficult.

That said here are some guidelines to follow:

• Taglines ≠ Website headings (most of the time) website headings are more descriptive, taglines are more ethereal and vision oriented

• Aim your tagline at invoking the feeling you want your user to have or the vision you have for the world

• Keep it under 5 syllables if you can :)

I like it. Go for it.

I think the one you have works.

Here are a couple more options:

"Easily organize your offline community and events"

"Managing an offline community?
It just got easier."

I also like @jkchu's idea of highlighting whatever feature differentiates your service.

I feel like "fans" isn't the right noun after looking at your landing page. I personally like your existing hero text a lot more. Maybe you could update your existing text by replacing "with ease" with a your most valuable feature (if you have one)?

Anyways, best of luck with your launch, your landing page looks solid!

Is the only customer people with a fan base or are there also more community like events like Meetup? If the product’s only customer is people with a fan base, then it’s good.