nommy.app launched a Show HN today for food-business website builder. Their H1: "Create website for your food business in minutes."
The problem: restaurant and bakery owners don't buy websites. They buy more orders, more foot traffic, and looking better than whoever shows up on Google first.
"In minutes" is a speed claim about the tool. The buyer's question is: "does this actually get me more customers?" — and that question goes unanswered above the fold.
A reframe that speaks buyer language: "Your bakery takes online orders tonight — menu, pickup, Google-ready, 20 minutes."
Same product. Same speed claim. The difference: you're now selling the outcome the owner actually wants, not the tool they have to learn.
I ran a full above-fold audit (3 findings) if useful: https://outboundautonomy.com/fix-sprint?url=nommy.app&ref=fixsprint-ih-nommy-20260620
Happy to do the same for anyone's landing page here — just drop your URL.