Hey, guys I have been working on a new landing page for the past week or so.
https://leadclone.com
Hey, guys
I have been working on a new landing page for the past week or so. The company/service is also new, so at this stage, I am exploring and learning.
I would love to get some feedback on how your experience of the page is and how easy it is to understand the text. I am still really flexible with the design and choice of illustrations.
Any feedback would be much appreciated.
The website: https://leadclone.com
Thanks :)
Kim Døfler
Copenhagen, Denmark
#landing-page-feedback / #product-feedback-request
The graphics are great! The page as a whole is very aesthetically pleasing. If I were you I'd consider less content on the landing page, and moving the details to a "How it works" section. It could also be trimmed down by getting rid of some redundancy - 'Getting started' and 'The LeadClone Process' section have some overlap for example. Also there are a few copyediting changes I'd recommend:
"We help keeping your sales rep busy" -> "We help to keep your sales rep busy"
"What does your customers have in common" -> "What do your customers have in common"
Thank you for taking the time to take a look at my website and read the text.
I think you are right about the dublicate content, will give that an extra thought.
I like your wording better of the two senteces. Will change asap.
Thanks again, much appreciated!
All the best
Kim
EDIT:
Your suggestions has been implemented :)
Nice!
was an explicit choice to insert only the email address and not a form?
Thank you :)
No, it was just a temporary solution.
I am definitely planning to make a form.
I was planning on using this content for a page with a form:
Headline: Price Estimator
What is your first name?
What is your company?
How much is a new customer worth to you?
How much money do you spend to make a new customer today?
How many leads do you need to make a customer today?
What do you sell?
Who are you currently trying to sell to?
Who is currently buying your offering?
How many leads do you reach out to on an average month?
What email do you want us to send the estimate to?
Button: [ Send Estimate ]
I think these questions are very valuable for me in order to know how and if I can help a potential customer and how expensive his/her problem is and on the other hand, I think some of the questions can be a bit sensitive and even difficult to answer.
Also I don't know if I should frame it as a price calculator or something else more casual.
What're your thoughts?
Hi! sorry for the late reply.
I personally think that you need to be very lucky if your customers that knows all those metrics.
A new idea: as those metrics are relative to the funnel , why don't you set them up in a graphic way to make it more interactive? Replying to lots of questions can create much friction.
Maybe you can start with the form and later on plan an A/B tests
I agree that these are hard. On one side I don't want to scare away potential customers on the other side it is very good indicator of a mature business that they know these numbers. So it quite be a strong qualifying form to take them through.
I like your graphics idea. So you mean you want to make the form into a more visual experience or do you mean that you would suggest an illustration of the relationship between the metrics in an infographic of sorts?
Yes, I was thinking:
Let me know if I got your input right?
Thanks for your inputs :)
Let's imagine a funnel chart that is compiled automatically given the data inserted by your lead.
Left side: table with fields to be filled
Right side: a funnel chart
This can be a good way to nudge them to understand that they are actually not converting some potentials customers
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