Been a while since I did this: Please review my homepage

You did an outstanding job in creating your landing page.

1/ Your headline makes sense, and you have a clear CTA.

2/ The screenshot of the application could be better. If possible, remove the MacBook and highlight the application's features rather than showing the whole dashboard.

3/ It's great that you have testimonials and press mentions. Doubled up on your social proof.

4/ You could highlight what Songbox does more clearly by highlighting features. One way to effectively do this is to highlight it as a benefit.

I've created a roast of your hero above the fold. Let me know what your thoughts are:

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You did an outstanding job in creating your landing page.

1/ Your headline makes sense, and you have a clear CTA.

2/ The screenshot of the application could be better. If possible, remove the MacBook and highlight the application's features rather than showing the whole dashboard.

3/ It's great that you have testimonials and press mentions. Doubled up on your social proof.

4/ You could highlight what Songbox does more clearly by highlighting features. One way to effectively do this is to highlight it as a benefit.

I've created a roast of your hero above the fold. Let me know what your thoughts are:

ux_raz

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3 years ago
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  Could I get your email address please Raz?
  
  Primer
  
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  3 years ago
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    Sure, raz@milkystudio.co
    
    ux_raz
    
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    3 years ago
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  This is great! Thankyou for giving up the time to do this.
  
  Primer
  
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  3 years ago
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    :)
    
    ux_raz
    
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    3 years ago
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