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"Better Writing, Less Toil." StormJournal Landing Page Feedback.

Howdy friends, soon to launch my new writing/research app, am hoping for a few eyeballs to take a look and make sure it's up to scratch. All feedback appreciated. Thanks

https://stormjournal.com

on August 31, 2019
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    Looks good - looking forward to trying it

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      Thanks mate, it's ready to use and we're giving early adopters free-forever access to a standard account. Have at it. Cheers.

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    Love this. @deadlysyntax send me a personal message when you can. I would love to see if we can collaborate on my new product that has a lot of cross over with yours. Message me here: support (at) proofreadingpros.io

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      Cheers Tyler. Will get in touch.

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    Great landing page, but I agree with @lkurusa. You might consider converting them into simple animated gifs, just to show the basics of your features.

    I'd at least recommend leaving out the audiotrack, as a lot of us are already listening to music while we work :-).

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      Appreciate the feedback, we're working on a condensed single video to replace the three and will turn those existing ones into gifs. Cheers for the reply.

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    Hi!

    Congratulations on your landing page. Looks awesome!

    I feel like it's ok to have one video on a page, but multiple kinda ruin it for me. I don't really know if I have time to watch all of your videos so I'll just watch one. Make that one count by showing all the great features. The rest of your "How it works" section then can be screenshots.

    Just my two cents, but hope this helps.

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      Great advice, thank you, will implement in the next few days.