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Big course launch this week, would LOVE your feedback on the landing page
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Daren Smith
https://www.craftsmancreative.co/courses/build-an-online-business
Hi Darren, I know it's a little late, but here's a bit of feedback in case you need it: https://www.loom.com/share/b89b9bfb1af349d78d6227c479076dbf
I'm sorry for how long it's taken me to reply here, but WOW, thanks for going that extra mile and doing a whole page tear-down. Such great insights and really appreciate how thorough you were.
Thank you!
No worries! I know how it is XD
You're welcome! Thanks for taking the time to respond :)
Can you switch 'Learn How To Build The Business Of Your Dreams' with 'Build an online business'? Since it's a course getting the value prop upfront is more valuable.
Love this. Thank you!
This is awesome! Small recommendation: I’d maybe turn these numbers into figures so they’re easy to spot for us lazy readers.
Original: “ This course takes over a decade of learning and compresses it into a few hours so that you can jumpstart….”
Suggested: “This course takes 10+ years of learning and compresses it into less than 3 hours so you can jumpstart…” (or whatever timeframe you’re shooting for).
I’d also maybe suggest squeezing ^ value proposition into your subheading “Social Media, Blogging, Network Marketing, and More, All in One Online Course…”.
Looks awesome!
Thanks a ton! This is great feedback. Much appreciated!
Thanks in advance to anyone willing to share their thoughts. This launch could be the biggest yet for the site, so I want to make sure the landing page makes sense, is compelling, and pulls people in.