Hey community! I've just launched Boon & Bliss and I would love to get some web design feedback. https://www.boonandbliss.com Thanks for your valuable help!
This is a fun idea!
I think some of the hero text at the top should be rearranged. Right now the hero text above the screenshot only has one short line about creating a dream, and then gets into the details of the steps. I think the hero text should be more about the value proposition of gifting a dream.
I found myself wishing for examples. When I think of dreams, I tend to think of pretty expensive things like going to school, starting a business, buying a house, going on a big trip. Dreams imply something that is somewhat out of reach, otherwise they would be achieved already. Maybe some groups can fund those types of dreams, but I think that isn't typical. So what are some ideas for more reasonable gifts? I wonder if the word dream is too big.
A couple small things
I reviewed the mobile version of the site, fyi.