🐔 broody - test your phrasing
Hey folks,
I’m launching a web app to help startups workshop the wording they're using to promote their business (taglines, tweets, titles, etc).
Here’s the landing page. There are chickens.
🐔 broody.io
I’d love to know (a) what is one thing (video/graphic/headline) that is working well and (b) one thing that most needs editing/removal.
Thanks!
Tim,
Love it! Great sense of humour. Animation is cool. Pay it or Earn it seems perfect.
Animation works really well. Immediately eye catching enough to make you watch and very short so you don't drift away. For what it's worth the "Seriously Try it" made me click through.
Text on https://broody.io/how_it_works page needs some attention; perhaps just bigger, more padding?? Where's your favicon?
Great job!
Hi @rab, thanks for checking it out! I've just added the favicon and cleaned up that how it works page.
Maybe reach out to @Primer as he is currently wrestling with naming his next big thing.
@rab Thanks so much! This is fantastic and lovely feedback. I'm making the favicon now (with some embarrassment) and my partner is cleaning up that How it Works page.
Many, many thanks!
First, I want to know who leaked that picture of me coding that you used as an illustration for your Vimeo.
Second, the hero video is fun, but low res (just like most of the pictures).
Texts probably all need a bit more vertical spacing.
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Haha! We have been following you for some time. 🕵️♂️ We'll stop now that we have our illustration.
Yeah, I've wanted to go higher res on that hero vid, just wasn't sure if the extra bandwidth was worth it. The fact you're pointing it out makes me reaaally want to go bigger. Seriously, thanks for noting that.
And we'll add some vertical spacing as well.
Many thanks, @sowenjub!
The video got me interested immediately! I set up a poll and already am getting a ton of awesome feedback. https://broody.io/take/a8ae104b-55ad-4af7-9415-cb11f85010fc
The text on the image at the coffeeshop is a little blurry. Also, if I can't sign up for a paid account why even mention it (on the homepage)?
Wow, thank you, Joe! So glad you tried it out and got some useful feedback.
And thanks for the specific notes:
• So glad to hear the video was compelling. I think we're gonna consider making that a paid ad
• that coffeeshop image will likely get some attention tomorrow
• as for the "Broody Plus" description, I kind of want to tease some of the upcoming features that'll be available to paid accounts, although maybe this isn't the best way to do it. At a minimum, we'll give it an edit.
Many thanks!
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