Built a basic landing page today
https://everlogue.aicygnus.com/
Today I built my basic landing page for Everlogue. It will be an app that takes voice notes and summarise them.
If anyone would like to roast my landing page they are welcome.
Some specific things that I am looking for
Is the page explaining what the app does or not
i am goint to roast it ...
The message ...
"Clear Your Mind
Untangle your thoughts with our voice notes. Just dump your thoughts into the app and our app will take your jumbled ideas and crafts them into organized, clear notes, freeing your mind for what matters."
"Clear Your Mind" ... is for meditation sites :)
"Untangle your thoughts with our voice notes." ... vague text ... remove text ...
"just dump" ... so your application is a dumping site ? ... remove text
"crafts them into organized" ... organized ? ... can you create a category for voice processed texts ... i didn't saw that option ... remove text
"clear notes" ... it has a problem with nouns ... so it's not clear .. remove text ...
"freeing your mind for what matters." ... this app exists to free people«s mind. People are always having thoughts ... remove text ...
... and remove that meditation image ...
Try something like ...
"Capture your ideas and organize them for future use. "
Add a new picture related to it.
Add an option to add categories. :)
I wish all the best for you project
Pedro