Hi Hackers! So this is v2 of a landing page I asked about at the end of last year…
Hi Hackers! So this is v2 of a landing page I asked about at the end of last year, integrating really helpful suggestions from the community. Any thoughts super welcome!
The TL:DR of our services: We find new leads and clients for startups and newer enterprises, identify new markets and opportunities toward which the product can be pivoted or diversified, and we craft pitches and product positioning to help onboard clients now and for tomorrow.
FYI we offer lower rates to Hackers and those on r/entrepreneur because it's important to look after the community.
https://unstuck-go-landing-page-white.webflow.io/
Thanks in advance!
#landing-page-feedback
I have a lot of feedback to give you but I don't know where to start, I am not trying to be mean but it's awful.
Here are some highlights of what I thought as I loaded ur page:
I suggest you go on lapa.ninja or some other inspiration landing page website and think it through or hire a professional if you're really serious about this!
I agree with this comment, there is so much going on here, I don't even know where I should be looking or what I should be reading.
I personally would not buy anything from a landing page with Gifs. If your target audience is businesses, I would think about removing.
The page is probably a little too long, I was easily confused looking down the page going from "NEW LEADS, USE-CASES AND MARKETS" to "THE POWER OF THE PIVOT" to "WE DON'T WORK WITH JUST ANYONE" to "Speakers & Events", maybe focus on 1 thing for this landing page, put other stuff like Speakers & Events on a different page.
Phrases like "Send Carrier Pigeon" maybe not be the right phrasing for a business audience, make sure you've talked to some potential clients about the wording because this could easily scare them off.
Thanks for the feedback- I would rather somebody be direct than not! Very useful- maybe back to the drawing board on this one!