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Can I get some feedback on my landing page? [Closed] Thanks so much :D

https://www.prisimanimations.com/

Overall, I liked the other landing page it just felt it lacked some flair to it

Please let me know if this is any better and I'm always open to more suggestions :D

Old versions if curious/ very bored: https://www.prisimanimations.com/About.php

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    Great work so far! Some suggestions I have are:

    1. Not clear what I get for signing up / why should I sign up?
    2. A lot is happening on the top header bar. Focus to the top 3 most popular?
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    Hi there,

    Nice work so far. My feedback would be that the call-to-action and value prop aren't very clear at this point. In the first 10 seconds I should have a clear understanding as to what you do and why it's of value to me.

    I think stylistically it's fairly clean, but the scaling and sizing seems a bit off. Visiting from a laptop, it looks like it was meant for mobile that was stretched out to fill my viewport.

    I hope that helps! Looks like you're heading in the right direction.

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    a lot of improvements since the last time, very good. But is missing contrast and typography sizes are a bit misleading.

    Look I made you a small template if you want to follow it up.

    https://codepen.io/MichaelAndreuzza/pen/qBBNWJr?editors=1100

    • Behind the hero text, I would have an animation...for example.
    • Do not ask someone to Sign up before you explain what you offer
    • The features explain them with cards and explain them what is it about. In terms of UX us easier for the reader to understand.
    • The footer should have some type of small navigation and a call to action is never wrong.

    hope it helps you

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      Thanks so much that’s exactly what I’m looking for! I’ll try to fix it up the best I can.

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        you welcome mate

        Let me know if you need help with the rest...i could help you out

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    My feedback is similar to what @aaavl2821 said in his comment. It works to focus on what potential benefits the user will get when using your website.

    To give an example: the main CTA (Call To Action) on the landing page right now is "Click here to Sign Up now!". But it's not obvious at first sight which benefits you get from signing up. (So why should I make the effort?)

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    Looks good, I'm not an animator but it might help to have more "benefits-focused" language vs "feature focused". I.e. instead of saying "best place to learn about and post animations" you could say why someone would want to post animations or how it would benefit them.

    It might also help to list and describe what the site offers on the landing page -- based on reading the landing page alone, I don't really know what I'll find on the rest of the site. After clicking on some of the navbar links, I get a bit better idea, but still not totally clear. Is it a site that reviews animation software? Is it a feed of videos?

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    Visited it on my phone. IMHO Looks a big huge on mobile. The triangle graphic is quite pixelated on my iPhone X. I would suggested rebuilding it as an svg as it is quite a simple shape. 👍

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      Will do, thanks for the suggestion

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    Hey Avery! I think the page looks great although I couldn't compare to the old version, the link is displaying a 404 :/

    One suggestion I have is to make the menu items smaller in font-size so that they can fit in one line. Menus aren't the main focus so it's always nice to see less of it. Also, the sections in the main containers could use some improvement. I'd maybe keep the same weight and font-family as your menu.

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      I'm sorry about that, forgot to capitalize the A.

      Thanks a lot for the feedback, I made it one line and it looks great :D

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        Awesome glad I could help. I just took a look at the old page. These are some major improvements!

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    Hey, great work. In terms of the design, I'd focus on making it look a bit more modern :)

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      What can I do to make it more modern?

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        This comment was deleted a year ago.

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          It kind of is since I had to make it and my drawing tablet is broken, but I’ll touch it up some :D

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