Can you give me feedback on this copy for imdone.io...
The biggest problem developers have with task management is leaving their code to keep the task management system up to date. That makes it hard for product owners, product managers and other team members to know the status of a piece of work.
Kanban boards, issue trackers and project management tools that are built for non-developers (That's most of them) can't fix this problem — they can only make it worse. Imdone is different. It keeps all the development tasks in the code, making task management easy for developers.
We use imdone to build software (imdone), plan marketing campaigns, track personal goals — you get the idea. It's a simple way to stay organized when you spend most of your day in a text editor.
What you have above sounds more like something that should be voiced over on a video than what'd I'd consider landing page copy. There's a lot of goodies in there, I'd refine down and make it punchier.
Maybe at the top of the page have something like:
Project management in the code, the way it should be
Something that boils down your value proposition into a hook for customers. Then lead into a video and then a CTA, then add in what you have above and finish with another CTA.
Thanks! This is great.
Can you give some context?
Where is this copy being used?
What is the goal? What action do you want the reader to take?
It's live on the imdone.io home page. The goal is for the user to connect with the problem so they are open to my solution.
Ok. Some feedback...
Good stuff! Thanks for your help!
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