Can you give me landing page feedback?
This year I wanted to focus on spending more time with my family and friends.
Focused on Me is a calendar assistant that keeps me on track with my time management goals.
I worked on this a year ago, but decided to give it another try after giving it a revamp and making it much more useful for myself.
Can I get some feedback on my landing page? How can it improve?
I think in the header it should say clearly what problem it solves.
Thanks for the feedback!
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Thanks! I’m seeing some similar feedback with the hero section and logo. Definitely going to work on that
I think the layout needs more information on what your service does. If someone were to accidentally drop in (like me) and the first thing I look at on mobile is that it’s calendar assistant okay that’s great. But there are no info like how the process works or how it would save me time is not really clearly communicated IMO (yeah Google calendar but is that it?) last but not least I guess I have to sign up my email to get to know more which for people like me it’s either a no-no or I just use my leftover email which results in false user acquisition for you.
Long story short I think having a clearer message of what your site/service is supposed to do and how it will save time by encouraging me to use it will be important. But that’s just me.
I appreciate the detailed feedback. And that’s a great callout on the false user acquisition, I think that’s a problem I’ve been facing.
I’m going to have to think about how to make this more clear.
False user acquisition is everywhere, even a social experiment instagram account we are building at the moment. It has garnered some attention, but only less than 2% of it could be potential leads, with many being bots or freebie hunters. That's just how it is unless it's a product that sounds like an absolute no brainer deal compared to competition.
I think the spacing is a bit big at the top from the call to action to the next section. You could have more contrast in font size from big to small. Perhaps an animation of who it works / screen capture of it working or if its still a prototype the click through of a wireframe. Looks cool all in all
Gotcha, thank you! My header needs some work but this is a great direction
The design is clean and minimalistic. I love the contrast between the colors. Some things I would add are real product screenshots or demo video. Seems like what's presented are small component pieces (idk if it's real), this may cast doubt to visitors especially that they're giving their personal calendar data. Testimonials would add a degree of trust too. Seems like a wonderful product! Good luck!
Thank you! I’m seeing demos and product screenshots in a lot of the feedback, I will be sure to add it in
I agree with the others and recommend you also get feedback from these 2 websites that use ai for feedback. They are both very good. App.wevo.ai and roastedwithai.com both sites are on IH and/or product hunt.
Good luck!
Thanks, I’ll give it a try
Your landing page looks clean and straightforward. The logo looks very small. Consider adding a brief, impactful testimonial or use case to build trust.
Will do, thank you for your time
Too static and minimalistic, logo looks too small, would add a little bit more of information and a design revamp. Seems like some work on the branding has to be made for the page to make sense and convert.
Best of luck ! Happy to give it another look later
True, I thought the product may have been a bad idea but it’s clear now I’m not properly building trust with visitors.
I’ll work on it, thanks for your input!
too minimalistic, it looks unfinished. change the typography too.
Gotcha, thanks for the feedback!
Hey, I think your logo looks way too small on the desktop. I guess that is intentional but it looks like an error and also not very readable.
I am not a designer but I would make the logo bigger + put a background color (or shape) behind the title. The bottom part of the page looks okay to me.
Hope that feedback helps. Would be better to get an opinion from a designer or a front-end guy though :)
That’s great feedback, I appreciate it!