Can you kindly help to review my landing page?

Looks good at first sight. It is directly clear what your service is.

Performance: your site is slow, and takes long to load. You can lose potential customers here.

Visuals: Nice! I like this, but the visuals are shown in Arab or something to me with RTL. To me, as someone from European origin, this is a little confusing.

The testimonials: the color of the text is red. To me, this doesn't feel nice. I associate this often with an error, but maybe that's just me personal.

Pricing: everything is discounted. I think that discounting everything is not that great. What kind of users do you want, people always seeking for the cheapest and discounts for everything? Or people who want a good products where the price is less relevant? I want the second, but I think this is just a personal preference on how to do this.

Pricing 2: Make one package "recommended", I like that since the focus will be more drawn to just 1 package instead of 3. Focus on less elements is always better to me in terms of UX.

Pricing 3: There is a start free, but not at the pricing section. I went to the pricing section without noticing the button in the banner, and thought there was no (free) trial. I am typically a user who would want to pay for a product, but want to try it first - unless it is a well-known product of a big publisher (like Adobe for example).

Overall: Looks nice, my feedback is just finishing touches I think. Be sure you track behaviour of your visitors with analytics software, so you can further optimise data-driven.

Good luck!!!

I'll give you some feedback (I'm a high value designer and work with YC companies).

Anyway, lets start from the hero section. Visual hierarchy is clear, but the text-image overlay doesn't work too well. I can see you have used two fonts, but neither of them are applicable for your use case. Poppins should be restricted to only headings, and you should get rid of roboto all together. The buttons and content allover is too big for a decent visual appeal, and the text weight is not too consistent.

Moving on to graphic presentation and illustration, the product is not animated so its hard for users to see how this thing works. Also, you should try to move from product screenshots to a custom designed app overview that follows a strict color scheme. Perhaps you should try to evolve on the blue colors you have going on, and get rid of the orange all together.

I usually charge for design audits, so I'm not going to go too deep into this thing but here is a list of things you should keep in mind for the next release of the landing page:

1. Content size
2. Product Walkthrough
3. Visual Hierarchy
4. Color Scheme

Try to use a Webflow Template for something like this, and take some inspiration from Dribbble. Later you could move to an agency or a freelancer. Anyway, great attempt and I'm excited to see what you do next with this!

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I think it's great and makes sense. I would put the testimonials much higher

Very nice looking site but some parts of the landing page were slow to load!

You need a hamburger menu on mobile version for better usability.

Congrats on your project.
Here's some update:

• Change The Logo
• Use Static Site Generator instead of WordPress
• Compress your images Tiny Png

I am not a fan of the logo, but the main issue I have is that I am not sure how capable your builder is. Does it only create a wrapper for a website or is it something else? How can I make an instant app where you don't even know what features I have for it?

Congrats on the site and the business. Wishing you all the success.

1. The above the fold content is clear.
2. Perhaps think about including a video of how the product works.
3. On the pricing, 'Promo' text is not available for the USA.
4. The clients section needs to be reworked. Basically you are showing similar screens of different apps. I would suggest you show the other screens as well but most importantly demonstrate what is possible with Mobilzer.

All the best!

Two minor pieces of feedback are:

1. Load time appears to be too high
2. Consider stating prices in USD instead of SAR - I don't even know what a SAR is let alone how much it's worth. It makes me think the product isn't meant for my market.

I'm on a 4g connection, but it is taking forever to load. At least 10s before I could see anything.

Make sure to optimize page load time.

One thing I noticed was that it took the images very long time to load. I had at least 7 seconds in which I saw some text with large white gaps.
For a site that wants to build my mobile app this is concerning.

Regarding the product - you start with the themes and logo, but I don't understand what I can build with it. I'd like to see screenshot of how I can build one of my app's screens.

I quite like it. It's rather minimalist and clean, and it's pretty clear what it does.
Now some suggestions:

• As a visitor, very early on I would like to know for what platform(s) I will get to create a mobile app. You can add logos of Google Play and/or iTunes to clarify that.
• I don't see why the "English" link should exist on the English page. You'd want to have the "Arabic" button for the English page and vice versa.
• How do I contact you? If I don't find it within seconds, I'm out.
• The screenshots are not very helpful since they are so small. I would suggest to zoom in and show the part that is relevant to the visitor.
• I don't find the testimonials very credible, since I don't see names of the people saying those things. To add more credibility to the testimonials, hyperlink the logos, so that I can visit those companies.
• The actual pricing section seems to be separated from the buttons above it (Canada, Monthly, etc). Bringing them closer together and giving them all the same borders or same background colour will help
• If I were an American, I would be unhappy that the price for Canadians is lower than what I would have to pay. Unless Canadians won't pay in CAD but in USD, and in that case it is very unclear.
• Why is there a Worldwide option for pricing, while it's exactly the same as Canada and US? My suggestion would be to instead of countries, set a currency. Even better, only put USD and charge the same for all countries to avoid confusion.
• Add a question mark that shows more details when hovered over. For example I have no idea what "Shipping" means, or what you mean by "Mobile-web App."
• Last point on pricing, it's unclear whether it's monthly, yearly, one-off, or ..? And why is there a "promo" text there?
• Why are your terms and conditions in Arabic? Are you certain you want to serve international clients? Often times wanting to serve everyone results in not serving any.
• I like the idea of having an FAQ, but I'm not sure about the questions: "Can I edit my information?" well, I don't know of a single place where the answer to this might be a "no."
• I would change "Our clients" to "Our portfolio" or even better "Some apps created by Mobilzer"
• I would like to see a better separation between each section of the website.

I hope that you find this feedback helpful!