Can you proofread my LP copy?
Hi,
I am currently investing all my out-of-work time into automail.org
I am working on LP copy for a while but since I look at this copy for a very long time, I am not able to see grammar and logic mistakes anymore. Can you please take a look and tell me the copy and communication problems?
As a return, I can give feedback to your LP. Plus I can answer your questions about Email Marketing. (I am working as a Digital Marketing Manager in my day job)
Best,
Hey Emre
Cool idea 🙌, templating would make the email marketing process so much easier!
Some of your word structurings are a little bit off, eg: "You Can't Get Email Marketing Right, Aren't You?" should probably read as "You can't get email marketing right can you?".
I think using the grammarly.com plugin will help you heaps here!
And perhaps the less is more approach may make your messaging more accessible from a UX standpoint.
Thanks. I am already thinking about reducing the size but at the moment I just focused on shipping this version. :) I will do A/B test on fewer text versions :) I already use Grammarly but I am not a native English speaker so some of my sentences are off-logic for sure.
The two big things I need to solve in this copy are:
And thanks for praise on the idea :) I believe that will solve a lot of headaches for entrepreneurs and solopreneurs but I feel that I need to work on this LP copy more and more :)
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Thanks for the feedback. I try to avoid difficult words as much as I can. I am open for suggestions to replace verbiage :)