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Can you tell me what my company does?

Hey everyone,

We’ve made an MVP, but I’m always trying to get feedback on my landing page and product. I want to make sure people understand what we do and what we provide.

What do you think we do? How can we be better?

Ourbreadcrumbs.co

on February 4, 2022
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    Hi,

    here are the suggestions:

    https://ibb.co/JpvqxkT

    *the link will expire after a week

    one tip: you could put the customer testimonials a bit higher.

    lemme know if you want more help

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      Wow I really like your suggestions especiall the button

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    Hi,

    I tried to explore you landing page as if I had randomly encountered it on the internet. After quickly looking through it, I would assume it's some sort of a job listing site with some advanced filters or some job opening and candidate matching platform.

    It might be helpful to have a subheading below "We help you find your dream tech career" that quickly explains how you plan to achieve this.

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      Perfect thank you!

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    Hi,

    I think your first image might by cropped out a little bit. Also, you filled the menu with lots of options. Its not good for your visitors to do that.

    I just redid my landing page too. feel free to check it out at https://twayobiz.com for some ideas.

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      I see what you’re saying too

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      When you say menu, what part are you refering too?

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    Hey Frank,

    From a quick glance, it looks like a job coaching program.

    Am I right?

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      For now, that’s spot on. Thank you!