Can you tell what we do? Grunt test
How to Figure Out if Your Website is CLEAR? One of the best ways is by conducting a “Grunt Test”!
A Grunt test should tell you the answer to 3 questions:
- What do you offer?
- How will it make my life better?
- What do I need to do to buy it?
Can you answer these questions after looking at my landing page for 5 seconds?
After 5 seconds, I can tell that you're offering some type of community for entrepreneurs, but I'm not sure what the commitment will actually be.
I'm not sure what I would need to do to buy it (but I'm guessing that's what the "early access" button is for.
Thank you!
I'll make sure to better communicate what we offer.
"Accelerate your success" is pretty vague. I don't understand what I will be getting if I join the paid mastermind group.
I understand what your startup is about but not how it will help me.
Thank you! I'll try to make it more clear
Thank you!
I used original questions, but I should've changed the last one. It's more like: "What should I do?" or something like that.
Also, what made you think it's only paid masterminds? We have a free option
You didn't say a price. I assume it costs. :)
It's weak on question three. Also it's not clear as could be on what joining results in - what am i joining and what are its demands?
Thank you for the feedback!
I was hoping the paragraph under the headline would help clarify that "what am I joining" question.
Check out the whole page: https://www.okupio.com/
Do you get a better picture after you see the rest?
Yes rest of page explains it well. I'd push further to see how you can condense messaging. What ties certain points together? Remember, if you're reaching the right people then the mostly know the Value Prop you're explicating. Make it plain and focus on securing trust and interest --in you-- as the provider.
Thanks for the tip!