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CarsXE App Landing Page

by Abe Darwish
https://carsxe.com

I built an application for people to buy and sell cars that provides all the information necessary for people to make an informed decision (along with a few useful features) let me know what you think of the landing page I made for it:
https://carsxe.com

Abe Darwish's avatarAbe Darwish
submitted this linkon September 20, 2019
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    Hi !
    I like your app idea !

    Some comments about visual design (desktop view):

    • I like the grey+blue colors.
    • Love the clean style.
    • Good menu animation.
    • Logo car is good (maybe wheels should be bigger a bit)
    • Big car in the header looks like shadow (some details are too dark), I love the girl though :)
    • "Sell Your Car", "Buy In-App" titles can be bigger too.
    • It's better to stylize with color the "WHY CARSXE?" horizontal section to stand out from header.
    • Those 6 icons can be bigger too.
    • Don't really like the viewport scroll after "INTRODUCING CARSXE" sections expanding.
    • "A USED CAR MARKETPLACE WE'VE BEEN WAITING FOR" section: square boxes colors a bit pale (but it's personal) You can make text in squares bigger too.
    • You can try to paint "Download CarsXE" button in blue color (to match global color scheme)
    • Same with violet background color - You can play with blue color shades instead.
    • Not sure if ABeeZee font matches Helvetica font for input labels.
    • Maybe its better to put input label to the left (not center)
    • Footer has too little content and feels lonely :)

    Good Luck with your application !
    Have a great day !

    Romarto_Design's avatar Romarto_Design
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      Hey! I'm here to update you that thanks to your comments we made a lot of changes to the landing page. I know you didn't like the accordion section but do you have any suggestions for alternatives?

      Abe Darwish's avatar Abe Darwish
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      7 years ago
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        Hi !
        Accordion is fine !
        I just don't like the "viewport scrolling" effect after you click the accordion title.
        Feel free to ping me with any questions :)

        Romarto_Design's avatar Romarto_Design
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        7 years ago
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      Awesome! Thanks for the feedback I’ll see what I can do to update it!

      Abe Darwish's avatar Abe Darwish
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      Wow, thats impressive.

      shaqqs's avatar shaqqs
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    All looks clean. I would prefer more phone screenshot than the car illustration. Its looks are very generic.

    shaqqs's avatar shaqqs
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    7 years ago
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      Gotcha... the idea is how to add more images without making it too stark

      Abe Darwish's avatar Abe Darwish
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