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#landing-page-feedback intray.eu

#landing-page-feedback intray.eu

on December 9, 2018
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    Lots of text! Looks intimidating. Might be good to break things up by increasing the spacing between section, adding images, etc. People are more likely to read X amount of text if they're slowly led into it rather than if they see the entirety of X all at once.

    "Are you having a hard time getting things off your mind?" Weird problem statement imo. Will that resonate with people? Does anyone identify as being someone who has difficulty getting things off their mind? I like what you say in your list below, under the "Has one of the following scenarios ever happened to you?" section. Based on what you're saying there, Intray does a better job helping people not forget things. That seems like a better problem statement to me.

    You explain a ton about the tool, but you should also just show a screenshot or a gif of it in use. That'll convey a ton of information to potential users.

    You spend a lot of time talking about developer-specific stuff: CLIs, Github, open source, org-mode, etc. Clearly, this is made for developers… so why not say so? It's a huge advantage to appeal to a niche, but your marketing copy isn't taking advantage of it. Any developer would rather use an "X for developers" than an "X", so I'd put language like that up top.

    Thanks for sharing!