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Hiiiii IH Community.
After receiving a lot of feedback from the previous post, our team has revised all of it and created a new website for our product.
Please check it out and give us your precious feedback: https://www.save.day/
A quick roast website by Demonic design.
The website overall is clean and tidy, but there are a few things worth considering.
Aesthetics and CSS:
1. Some texts (e.g., "Everything, everywhere, all at once") don't fit in mobile versions - it's worth adding paddings/margins.
2. In the footer on mobile, the button overlaps the text in an unpleasant way.
3. In the FAQ section on mobile, the text expands in a way that disrupts the layout.
4."How can I help others?" - Make the tiles wrap when they don't fit on the screen.
Storyline
I’ll be honest, after the first three "slides," I didn't understand what it was about.
In the hero section, I understood that SaveDay is the name of a person I can talk to via Telegram, and I had the impression that you are a lesser copy of raindrop.io.
Normally, at this stage, I would have closed the website and not looked for further information. I delved into the rest of the content because I started writing this post.
Only on the fourth slide did I grasp the idea behind your project, and then I realized it's actually very cool because it feels very natural. After all, when I ask my wife something, I also say, "Do you remember the movie with that bearded actor we watched three months ago?"
I don't know what advice you received before, but I would conduct some A/B testing. I would change the order of the slides and modify the Hero section to try to achieve an immediate WOW effect. Maybe a value proposition like "Looking for something on the tip of your tongue? SaveDay will help you find it" could work better for your users.
I hope I helped, and maybe in the future, we can collaborate together someday :)
Omg thanks a lot for your super detailed feedback. We're trying to fix the issues with the mobile version. Btw, have you tried our product yet? Hope that our tool can solve your problem with the movie with that bearded actor we watched three months ago ^^
I'm a content person and not a web design person at all but I think it looks really clean. I love that you have a clear color palette and you've kept it consistent across the board. It is a GORGEOUS site overall.
From a content perspective, I think your headline and overall information needs more clarity. From a glance, I am not sure what is meant by 'everything' is saved and is a search away.
You can be more specific which should help with engagement and conversions.
Do you have any suggestions for the content?
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Yayyy I'm so glad to hear your feedback. I don't know what word should I use to replace "everything" since our bot can support every types of content, from PDF files, youtube videos, articles links or even audio from Spotify or Apple music.
I need to look into it in greater detail but to start with, what about having the word 'everything' flip between different words like 'files', 'videos', 'articles' etc until it settles into everything as the final word.
Love your feedback. We've just adjusted the website. Is it what you mean? https://www.save.day/
Wow, that was quick! Yes, that is what I meant!
Thanks a lot. Have you used our product yet? What do you think?
The yellow is an interesting color for a theme. Makes me think of tools.
Yessss this is also our intention
You have a great domain name. Easy to remember.
Thanks nomad for your compliment. We paid $500 for this one lol
I like the color and fantasy on UXUI. Only scrolling is not that smooth yet. Can you feedback our website too? if yes, www.kaikul.com. Thank you!.
Hiii. I've checked both on desktop and mobile. Your site looks great, quite simple and clean. However, you should check the margin on the mobile version because some parts don't fit on the screen (the last CTA). The typographic alignment in the FAQ part on mobile version is not consistent. Btw good luck with your launch on PH!
Thank you Tradao004!