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Check out my startup landing page- I'd love some feedback !

by Gatsby

Hey guys,

Check out my startup landing page at https://titanmarket.co.ke/.

I had to hack it together after our technical lead left last week. I am still learning web development and this is my first public project. I'd love some to hear what you think.

Thanks.

Gatsby's avatarGatsby
on April 12, 2020
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    The landing page looks really good! Pretty amazing if you're new to this ;)

    There are just some very minor things that came to my attention (desktop view):

    1. The "How it works" feels a bit too close to the image to me. Maybe adding some whitespace between the image and the headline could help.
    2. The alignment of the second step in "How it works" seems a bit off.
    3. Maybe you could add the call-to-action (I suppose these are the "download the app" buttons) additionally somewhere in the bottom area of the page. When I went through the landing page, my thought was "And how could I get started now?"

    Good job so far!

    manuelkruisz's avatar manuelkruisz
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      Thank you Senator for you feedback. Those are very intuitive ideas and I'll be implementing them asap :)

      Gatsby's avatar Gatsby
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      6 years ago
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    I really like the landing page @Gatsby well designed!

    When I clicked in to learn more about the business app, the design looks a bit misaligned, going to make a change?

    I'm also working on a small project, keen to know your feedback too :)

    felix12777's avatar felix12777
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    6 years ago
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      Yes. I have looked into the learn more page. Thanks :)

      I think VenturesList is such a promising idea and can be scaled. I did not quite grasp your business model though.
      Personally, I would be willing to pay for high quality information about venture capitalists and accelerators. If you wish the project to become a platform, note that "content creators" will be way fewer than consumers.
      Would you consider a paid newsletter subscription that delivers this kind of high quality information directly to your clients inbox?

      Gatsby's avatar Gatsby
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      6 years ago
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    hi Gatsby

    Page looks neat here are is my feedback:

    • The two CTA's in the header are confusing. As a new visitor to the site I don't know or understand the difference?
    • It seems you are targeting the Kenyan market, you could probably add some images to give it a local relevance.
    • The Let's talk CTA in the footer is confusing and competes with other 2 CTAs in the header.

    Hope that helps.

    thanks
    Waseem

    waseembashir's avatar waseembashir
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    6 years ago
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