The app is live but it will be wiped before official launch day - hopefully I don't get a surprise traction until then 🤣
Meanwhile, any feedback appreciated
Hopefully the message is clear enough - I know its quite basic, but I want to know if its enough to start marketing and convert
Overall, it looks pretty good! I did notice there's quite a bit of empty space. If you meant for it to be that way, then great! But if not, maybe consider adding some background designs or filling it in to make it more interesting. Also, it would be really helpful to have a live demo on the website so people can see how it works.
By live demo you mean an instance that people can play with? I might look into that, might require some extra dev but could help with sales (although I would likely have that after the initial launch)
Yep just an embeddable or demo page people can play with. Also, I would implement some sort of "discovery call/demo call" for people to sign up for a call to get sales in the door by using the software. It's the easiest way for you them to experience it
Your landing page is great! My critique's would be:
The graphics and content are nice and clear. My only critique is that everything feels like it's floating in whitespace... like it could benefit from some borders or other visual boundaries. But nice work, and good luck.
Looks awesome overall. I would suggest a few things namely making the graphics slightly smaller and reducing the amount of empty white space you have.
Looks cool. On mobile there’s a big space between the hero section and the next section. Also the get started button could be bigger.
Nice work overall! A few quick suggestions:
I love the casual tone overall though, reads very human-like! :)
The site very pleasant looking. Only thing you can look into is increasing the font size. Image by itself has the potential to grab attention compared to any text. So to balance the first fold of your site with the CTA I think making font size bigger and reducing the image on the right would make it more balanced and easy to scan. Overall I love the typography and clean interface of your site. Good Luck!
A lot of great tips, wasn't expecting that!!! Thanks everyone, will have some work to do before launch (besides all other things)
Hugely appreciate each comment
Good luck for the launch!
Would try to make the graphics a little smaller - should not be much bigger than the written content.
You could also think about separating the different sections with a slightly different background color grey shade, makes it more structured
Really well-structured and clear. I would make the font-size bigger and don't have that much written content.
Good luck on the launch Victor!
Nice website!
Here's what I like about it:
Here's what I'd suggest you change:
A lot of good points, thank you! The white space will definitely be tackled, I thought that as well but wasn't sure if was just me (turned out it wasn't)
Will also review how I refer to the customer, as I think this is confusing the user to what the app is for/who it is for.
I am new to solopreneur area, what does booking actually mean in this context? If it's booking an appointment kinda meaning, it wasn't obvious to me (Almost native english speaker). Maybe explain what it means (somewhere in the website), or you can find a better word.
Yeah, from your and some other comment - I think I need to improve what I call the customer. It would really be people that start small business that have customers booking services in certain time slots (salons, personal trainers, etc)
I will review the language around the subject
Thank you!
The website is very clear, and the product is explained very well.
The website looks clean and beautiful overall. However, I think the "Get Started" button should be larger, and there seems to be a bit too much empty space at the top when you first enter the site. These are just minor issues, though.
I'd say the headline isn't clear. The booking system for the small business owner is quite broad, not very specific and doesn't address the problem it solves.
Given the current stage your company is at, I'd tailor the messaging for a problem unaware, cold audience.
Hopefully that makes sense!
I know what you mean. In a way I'm going for a niche, but the tool itself has 'less features' than the competition (most features are focused on complex salons with multiple employees, etc). So my 'feature' is that its simpler to use, but its really hard to put that in words. I will think of something better.
Thank you
Looks good! I was checking it from my phone, the bottom section is missing some content and looks empty. Also, I didn't like the phrase "a booking solution, that works"., It seems to generic for me. Beside it, it looks good! Good luck with your launch!
Yeah, looking at it I don't like it either - will either remove or think of something better. Thank you!
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Those were great tips and thanks for taking your time, gonna compress those images and make them lazy loaded! Wasn't aware browsers supported that