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Could I have some feedback on my landing page please

Hello, I have been developing my workout tracker app for the last few months and I have a landing page that I quickly got out around initial launch.

I knew it wasn’t perfect at the time and I am now looking to update it.

Would anyone be able to provide some feedback on what I could improve.

https://workoutplan.app

on April 18, 2021
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    It would be great if there are some workout relevant graphics or a video shows how I am going to use this app.

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    My biggest question when looking at this is, why should I use this instead of the many other workout apps?

    This should be answered on the landing page IMO.

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    Off the top of my head, the overall design is good for its simplicity, but lacks elements reminding of what your app actually does. I'd also add CTAs and reduce the "Support and Contribute" part. You don't have to remove some text but you could reduce the font for instance to make this part less important on your landing page

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    Liked the simplicity, big fonts , clear message etc. The support and contribute part is too long. Add another call to action button as well (maybe after each primary block, that stands out more).

    As a user, I would like to see the analytics on the sets I've done, the value created tot me (that's not coming out I feel), it shows what I can do, but not what value it's creating tot me.

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    Hi,

    As a website designer, there is a bunch of things that I would change. You can take a look through those below:

    1. Your headings, sub-headings and text on the lower part of the landing page all look to be the same. Make sure that there is a clear hierarchy in the section.
    2. Adding animations to the phones would be a great way to increase users times on the site. Perhaps even making them 3D or embedding a video in them.
    3. Capitalisation and general grammar could be improved on the “workout” page.
    4. Only one CTA in the header. Making that scroll with users would be a great way to increase conversions.
    5. Adding more graphics would make for a better UX.
    6. Show how the app works with apple health.
    7. Show more of the benefits of the app. Compare it to competitors and show why your’s is better.

    There are some more minor things, but that is about it.

    Hope it helped :)

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    I think the purple top section that takes up 50% of the page is too minimalist. I'd include a 'hero shot' of your app.

    Also agree with @donaldng that the navigation menu isn't too user friendly.

    Otherwise, I think the copy and structure is good.

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    The navigation menu can put in more work, there is only one button at the top right I would naturally assume it was a CTA such as Download/Login/Register button the CTA "Free Workout" is also not clear.

    Also, I did not know how to go back to the homepage without using physical back button, clicking the logo to go back homepage is not as intuitive as you think.

    Support and contribution section can add some icons/images to it to make it look less dull as it is a wall of text right now, very reluctant to read and learn more about it.

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    Hi Adam, The Support and contribution section should have some more aesthetics to it. Try to fix it asap. Else, I am ok with current design. You can revamp when you find time

    Venkat