Could you review my landing page?
Happy Friday!
I'm gearing up to exit beta soon for https://trycereal.com/ and want to make sure our landing page is doing the right thing for our product! Any impressions, feedback, and thoughts would be helpful. Thanks!
It has good stuff on "what" and "how". I think more on "why" and specifically "why Cereal" could be beneficial.
Thanks for the feedback @sparkalow! Good reminder to focus on the value proposition and "why" we exist.
It's a really interesting concept and I think you do a good job of explaining the features and benefits on the landing page.
I'm not sure about your strapline - "Sites for content creators" just doesn't quite read right for me. Maybe "Custom websites for content creators"?
I can imagine people having questions about branding and customisation. Do you handle the domain name set up? Can you set up your own logos and colour schemes?
The page in general looks really polished and professional and my overall impression is positive. Good luck with the launch!
Thanks for the feedback @Steve_N! Good point about customization+domains, we do offer that so it's definitely worth highlighting here. I'll play with some options for tag line as well.
First impression of the page is that it is clean and professional.
To mash what sparkalow and Steve_N point out together, consider changing the heading to highlight the value you are bringing to your potential customers rather than what exactly it is. Make it something focused on why someone would use your product. You have the rest of the page to explain what it is if you can interest a viewer with the heading.
Good luck!