Meetzy drains inbound leads and books sales meetings with the qualified ones, in only seconds. It's a game-changer for companies who are looking for ways to scale their revenue.
What´s your opinion?
The main, over the fold pitch seems to be written more towards search engines with all that keyword stuffing rather than actual users. I have hard time understanding what this product is.
Also, the over the fold area is too busy. Three CTA buttons. One "i'm happy to to help" messaging popup. And that "Top b2b startup" logo thing. It's just hard to focus on anything when there is too much there.
The list of companies using your product looks suspect as there is no way for me to verify these companies actually use your product.
Using underlined texts, such as in "in seconds" text, is confusing as they look like text links.
The "your team with meetzy" chart looks entirely fake and made up. If it's not fake, it needs a lot more data as to what it is and how it is made.
Many parts of your copy reads unpolished and amateurish. For example, " It´s pure revenue ready to close" is a sentence that does not end with a period while your other similar sentences do, and in this case you are using the ´character and in some other parts of the copy, you are using the ' character. Inconsistency like these show that you have not spent the time to polish your landing page.
I think you are doing some things right but there is a lot of room to improve here.
Wow!! Thanks for your feedback @jv16. I really appreciate your comments. We will work harder to improve this parts of our landing.
First feedback:
'Meetzy drains inbound leads and books sales meetings with the qualified ones, in only seconds.' have no idea what this means. What is draining a lead? that doesn't sound good.
Looked at your website, still not sure.
Are you a routing tool? Or a lead enricher? Or both?
Make it clear.
Thanks @joshdance! yeap... We are doing the qualifying process for sales teams and then, if the lead is really a buyer with budget, we route it and book sales meeting with the right sales rep.
Maybe "drain" it´s not a good word. We will change it.
We are more a "qualifing + routing + booking" tool in one service.
This 'We are more a "qualifing + routing + booking" tool in one service.' is your hook you need to show on the website.
Old way:
New Way: