Critique my landing page
Hey, I launched Leave Me Alone ~6 months ago and have been iterating on the landing page design ever since! I just released a new design with more focus on social proof.
I welcome any criticism and feedback, specifically the following things;
- does it explain the product?
- does it make you interested to learn more?
- does it make you want to buy?
If yes/no to any of those comments would be appreciated.
Thanks! Have a great week :)
The design is very smooth. I like it!
Just one thing: the main CTA button could be more attractive. Compare those:
https://monosnap.com/image/bbgZki569nBd9RiDCNES4TKSdurvwe
What about the content. The only question I had in my head after seeing the landing page: "Why should I pay to someone to click the 'unsub' button for me?"
Hmm I'm not sure the purple works since we don't use that color anywhere else,but we do have a darker red we use for some CTA buttons we can try here. I'll have a go thanks!
It's annoying and time consuming to unsubscribe from all the mails you don't want anymore, especially if you have multiple email accounts. We show you all the subscription mail you receive from all your accounts in one place and make it easy to decide which to opt out of. You click unsubscribe in Leave Me Alone and we do the hard work for you.
I hope that makes it clearer?
I see. I have ~10 accounts and unsubscribing is still not a problem for me. It is just clicking a link once a week or so. Maybe I'm just not as active as your target audience :) Dunno.
P.S.: I think it would be awesome if you offer an "Unsubscribe from EVERYTHING" mega-super-button.
You could try with a #000 button then
I will try this and our primary red we use :) thank you for your feedback!
like it and get the idea with a smile face :)
I think you spent much time on it.
That's awesome! Thank you 😊 - we have spent fair amount of time making changes and improvements!
I love the tone of voice and the easter eggs :)
Agree with @alexanderisora that you should consider another primary CTA color since the current one visually blend with the rest of the color tones above the fold. For the button on the bottom you use #e73930 which I think works better.
Security would be a big concern for most buyers of your product and you have a really nice description here https://leavemealone.app/security - Since it's such a big concern in this case (giving out read-access to your private or corporate mailbox) I think you should turn your security into a USP above the fold (in example as a hint text to the primary CTA).
Thank you 😊 - James will be so happy to know people are finding his Easter eggs!
I agree I will likely change the CTA to that red and see how it looks :)
Thank you for reading our security page too! We have talked about making security one of our USPs but decided not to - cc @jivings to explain more since the new design is mostly his doing 😃
looks good, I was scrolling through it and could understand what it does and how it works without effort. The pink all over is a bit maybe too much ( not cause its pink) :) but Im a backend engineer so take that with a kilo of salt.
overall well done!
Thank you! That's great to hear we are conveying the product quickly and easily 😄. Noooo not the pink! We have toned it down quite a lot hehe
Thanks again for your reply!!
Hey Danielle,
I really like your landing page. Especially the small easter egg ;)
I think the product is explained very well, also I am interested to learn more.
I am not sure if I would buy the product, because I don't have the problem myself. But I can imagine for someone who lost control over his email this could be a good solution!
How did you build the landing page? Did you use any tools or libraries?
Best
C
Hey! Thank you very much for your honest feedback :) and I hope you enjoyed the Easter Egg!
It's custom made using Gatsby and React!