Critique my landing page
Hello, i'm launching an app called Rockup (https://rockupapp.com) soon. I have made a pre-launch landing page, and I'm looking to collect email addresses for early users and beta testers. Please roast my landing page!
Thank you
The concept is nice @doublestubble
Feedback:
I'm also updating my site, would be great to hear your feedback
Hi @felix12777, thanks for your feedback - I've increased the spacing between the lines, I hope it's better now, since all the lines are needed! An app store link will replace the launching soon part anyway.
Regarding your site, loved the idea and site design. Just one suggestion - the 'Get Free Template' button doesn't really tell me I can start from there. Maybe something like 'Get started for free' or 'Start with a free template' would be a bigger CTA according to me.
Hi,
I am not a all a designer, but I think that on the desktop version, you should give more space to your content.
basically the 'What can Rockup be used for?' frame should not be visible before scrolling.
Also, there is something I don't quite understand in your value proposition.
Do I have to actually have an app ? if no, how should can I import the design ? If yes, is mockup the correct word ?
Hi, and thanks for your response.
I agree with the content thing - it will certainly make it more prominent.
Rockup is an app for iPhone that helps you create mockups from screen recordings (videos) of your apps. Rockup helps you put those screen recordings in device stencils, enables you to narrate ( by voice recording ) anything you may wish to describe in the video, as well as add background music, to help you create professional looking video mockup of your app. You can import your screen recordings from the gallery of your phone.
I guess I haven't done a stellar job of explaining what exactly Rockup does!
Thanks for your reply.
I am not a native English speaker and was confused by the term 'Mockup'. I thought that implied that the application did not exist yet.
Also, I am not sure how 'stencils' is popular. I think I would go for 'frame'.
Regarding your content, you should probably add more sections to your landing page.
For example, what are the steps when making a new video?
In the video of your product, you import a source video. I am not even sure how should I make that video.
Also, you said I can add music to the video. Do you have a list of music that you provide or should I bring mine? If so, can I also edit the music?
Regarding the technical aspect, is the job done in the cloud or everything locally? This is probably an important point for some users.
I think you get the idea, I want to know more.
On another point, if you want to make demos of apps, you should probably an indicator for touch events, similar to the new iPad pointer.
Good luck with your project
Thank you so much, @Maxired! Your feedback is very detailed and immensely helpful! Will definitely make all the suggested changes.