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Critique my landing page?

by Pencircle
https://pencircle.com
Pencircle's avatarPencircle
submitted this linkon January 9, 2021
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    Positives:

    1. Simple, minimal look.
    2. Copy is good.
    3. Good call to action

    Improvements:

    1. The navigation on desktop should have links with text in the navbar. It is a standard. Currently, navigation is confusing. The hamburger menu should only be used for mobile devices.
    2. It's a new platform. I'd like to see how it's better by a comparison with other patronage platforms.
    3. Either use product images or illustrations. If you want to use both, split the content into two sections.
    4. I would love to see the socials of the creator on the page. As it is a patronage platform, it's all about community building in a credible way. As a user, I would like to know that is the creator of this platform a creative, what does he do, why did he create this platform?

    Hope this helps.

    thearslankhalid's avatar thearslankhalid
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    6 years ago
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      Hey, thanks a lot for commenting!
      You've made some solid points there especially about adding a comparison and socials. And I didn't know that hamburger menus are generally not preferred for desktop, thanks for that!
      I'll start working on your feedback.

      Pencircle's avatar Pencircle
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      6 years ago
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    There is not really much to critic! Great Header - but the different sizes of the sections do not feel intentional.

    I would be happy if you have feedback for our site paperless.io

    Garreis_Jonathan's avatar Garreis_Jonathan
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    6 years ago
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      Thanks for commenting!

      I absolutely looove your mockups and the animations! They look really nice.

      There's not much to critique but I would say that after some time it looks as if you're listing every single feature of the product. It can be a bit overwhelming. You could cut down on the number of features explained or sort them into more logical blocks - for example, all these features have to do with security, these with accessibility etc.

      Also, change to *Powerful all-in-one document solution.

      Looks like a great product!

      Pencircle's avatar Pencircle
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      6 years ago
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        Thanks! This is a good point.

        Garreis_Jonathan's avatar Garreis_Jonathan
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        6 years ago
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