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Critique my personal blog/site

I just pulled together this site for a personal blog/site thing yesterday afternoon and would love some external feedback on it!

https://maxsinclair.co.uk/

Initial impressions, thoughts, bugs, ideas to make it epic etc.?

The goal is to help make it easier to find me if anyone tries, to sum up what I'm working on easily, to give me a place to blog from and to help with getting opportunities to speak, do workshops type stuff.

I could have built it all myself but really for this I think a very quick Wordpress answer is best to let me know not spend all my precious coding time on it and keep that for my main SaaS I'm building.

A big thank you in advance for helping!

on October 16, 2022
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    I went your web site. Here's what I thoughts;

    In this case, let's think that I do not know you.

    1. First section is not cristial clear for me. I could not understand why I should I talk with you. You should give your target audience reason to believe. I think that you should also change the your first message. It's now "Just Another Ambitious Startup Guy", but why? Why should they talk with you. This message should give the reason to keep scrool your target audience.

    2. About welcome section, I can say that there are too many words in there. You should keep it short in this section also. Try to focus your why, and give this reason also in there. If I were you, I would put three things, which I do best for my target audience, to welcome section.

    3. Last thing is about your navbar. If you give another website link from your navbar, you should open new tab and direct your reader. If the another website open same tab, probably your reader is not gonna come back your web-site.

    I hope it would be useful for your web-site.

    Wish you all the best, dude! :)

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      Yeah good feedback! The new tab thing, 100%. Just trying to figure out how to add the target blank bit of code to make it happen with this Wordpress site 😅

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          Ah legend! Thank you! It's funny that that is auto switched off initially.

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            Hahah yes it is :D. Enjoy the progress!

            Also, I followed you on Twitter. It's good to connect with you!