Daily Newsletter Landing Page Feedback
We're a fast growing, female focused, daily health and wellness newsletter. Would love some landing page feedback from you all.
https://www.healthylifestyle.deals/subscribe
Thank you all so much!
We're a fast growing, female focused, daily health and wellness newsletter. Would love some landing page feedback from you all.
https://www.healthylifestyle.deals/subscribe
Thank you all so much!
I'm not sure who its for. You say female focused above but aside from the use of pinkish color, I don't get that feeling from the landing page. And it's not just whether male or female but think about age and what's going in their lives (someone in their 20s who works out twice a week probably wants different content to someone in their 40's who needs to get a healthy lifestyle)
I (should) care about a healthy lifestyle, but I wouldn't sign up for your newsletter because I don't know if it's for me.
You're absolutely right @pauldmet. We're going through a brand & voice exercise/course which will definitely be helping us whittle our demo down more. Thanks so much!
Hi there very good idea imho.
But I found your main color a bit cheap and same with those 3 emojis at the end.
Maybe just put less that pinkish color in the website, otherwise looks solid.
Good luck :)
@RobertoBagio - We're definitely going to rebrand in 2020. Launched the brand in 1 day earlier this year with no intention of really growing into the current business strategy, so plenty to do on that front.
If you have female focused health and wellness brands that stand out in your mind, we'd love to take a look at their branding. Cheers!
Adding testimonials would be nice.
Seems now the main point is to get me email for the free newsletter... anything that does not work towards that... i would take away.
Why pitch me a premium version that doesnt exist when... you havent gotten me for free yet.
Why mention unsubscribe? If you say newsletter now.. in 2019... implicitly I know I can unsubscribe. Spend those words convincing me to sign up now.
What did I miss recently that is really good? Show me what is good about the email... not just tell me.
You're absolutely right about the "why pitch a premium version" note @AndrewKamphey. We're launching a V1 version of the premium subscription soon and will move any mention of it to the 2nd page.
Love the "What did I miss recently..." note! We have some brand partners/offers that we can highlight. We'll use testimonials in the same way too.
Really appreciate you taking the time to make notes!