Hi everyone, I'd really appreciate your help in improving my landing page for my first startup
https://hangout.landen.co/
Let me know if you understood the product and what it does! Any other feedback is helpful
Your thoughts are appreciated
The landing page is very clean and friendly.
From my point of view, headline and sub headline reveal product well. Since there are people in the images, I would suggest using visual cues, such as person looking in the direction of the CTA or key feature. Maybe this will improve the conversion.
Best wishes
I think it looks good visually, but you need to work on your copy.
"We will customise your experience so you only get what you are after. Ensuring a great experience for all parties invovled" is a bit wordy and there is a typo ("invovled").
You still have some placeholder copy in there: "Use this section to show off one of your features in great detail. You can add a list of bullet-points with custom icons, checkmarks and a product display."
I'd also put your name "Hangout" in the top navbar and move the contact section to another page so that all the focus is on getting people to signup for the waitlist.
Thank you Gabe! It seems I've published the wrong version. Re: Contact section, that's a great idea